Tuesday, 15 June 2021
Writing week 7
That dog has made a mess. It looks like exploding chicken feathers.
The dog is sorry because, the dog’s head is tilted, and its eyes are shiny and wide. The dog’s heart feels blocked because, if I put myself in this picture I would look the same as the dog and well experience something like that.
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