2 Second describe. Updated

The people were on the roller coaster and at the highest point. They were so high it felt like they were in heaven looking down on the Earth. Far below they could see tiny people, as the size of ants crawling around in brightly couloured groups. They stop then 2 1. They were going down at nearly 125 miles per hour, their stomachs were feeling weird and filled up with air. They were going so fast that they couldn't breath by themselves, because their stomachs were filled up with air. Their bones were vibrating. Their teeth were shaking. It was so scary that they felt like they were falling down to earth with a second chance in life, to improve. When they were at a low point they were thinking that they were a part of the crawling ant groups. This is my writing peice from last week, but i improved it by putting in the settings senses and how they feel.